The lines look a bit clumsy-they could be smoother. The background’s very good, but I don’t know what’s going on with the teeth. The eyes could use a bit of work.
Sorry if I was a bit harsh on you-but I hate it when people don’t tell me what could be improved, only what’s good about it (which I didn’t list anything of- it’s a Fantastic drawing, and I love the angle and the colourings etc.) so I told you all the negatives.
Okay. The lines are wobbly because I drew this with a finger on a phone The eyes, I admit were rushed and the teeth were improvised. I was just trying something out with a drawing program I've used before.
Dance Panther screeches. And then she gets an evil idea.
Dance Panther grabs the saltwater-ified Seaweed and pours the water into a bucket. And then she clones the bucket of saltwater several times until she has a whole ton of buckets of saltwater. She then grabs a crane, and attaches a huge water tank big enough to carry several billion gallons of liquid. She then pours all the saltwater into the tank.
Then plan two commences.
She picks but 888, which is what I'll call Seaweed the FANDOM user to show their different then Seaweed the drago, and dumps them into a huge, extremely deep pit. All the saltwater is poured into the pit, and then Dance Panther scratches herself, bleeding rainbow blood into the saltwater. Then she throws a voodoo doll of herself, which is a small black ball of fabric with a blue bead for the nose and blue buttons for the eyes stitched on, a tiny cone of purple fabric for the party hat and a purple piece of confetti stitched on to be the tail, into the pit.
Suddenly, the voodoo dissolves, and Dance Panther, now Demonic Panther, transforms into a demon to enact her vengance.